Friday, September 2, 2011
eyes wide open
So much light. It is to hot. It is so bright. There is to much sun. This is no fun. Where's the sunscreen? sweating so bad, I'm finally becoming lean. i moved to the shad, i want some Gatorade. to clinch my thirst. i just saw sawyers little brother not dancing, that's a first. Everyone sitting down looking clueless. starring at there paper not writing.....Foolishness.
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Dion, Dion, Dion...
ReplyDeleteyou are to freaking funny. i really liked when you said, its really hot... because IT IS.
my advice is to dig down deep and find things that are of serious importance. ya no? instead of you wanting gatorade, although it was nice to know your thirst needs, its not necessary. :)
i love you D.BALLER! <3 <3
<3 Kelss.
SHOW "so much light." SHOW "it's too hot." SHOW "too much sun." SHOW "no fun."
ReplyDeleteI like the choppiness of the sentences, and the rhyming. It gives it a sort of comical bounce. But I'd like to see you exercise more control over the rhythm. The fourth and...seventh? sentences break whatever rhythm you had.
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